My School Trip - 一般过去时写作支架

初一英语作文指导（Unit 7词汇）

1. 开头（Introduction）

写作目标：用一般过去时介绍学校旅行基本情况。

句型模板：

  1. 时间地点：
    • Yesterday, we went on a trip to [地点].
    • 例句：Last week, our class visited the science museum.
  2. 同行人员：
    • We met up at school and took the bus together.

可用词汇（Unit 7）：

2. 主体部分（Body Paragraph）

写作目标：用一般过去时描述旅行中的活动和经历。

句型模板：

  1. 第一项活动：
    • First, we explored the [地点].
    • 例句：We saw many interesting exhibitions.
  2. 第二项活动：
    • Then, the guide taught us how to [活动].
    • 例句：We learned about the process of making fresh juice.
  3. 有趣经历：
    • The most exciting part was when we [活动].
    • 例句：I tried on an astronaut's helmet.

可用词汇（Unit 7）：

3. 结尾（Conclusion）

写作目标：用一般过去时表达感受和收获。

句型模板：

  1. 旅行感受：
    • We had a wonderful time.
    • 例句：I wrote down everything in my diary.
  2. 学习收获：
    • I learned many new things.
    • 例句：Now I realize how important science is.

可用词汇（Unit 7）：

完整范文示例

My School Trip

Yesterday, our class went on a trip to the science museum. We met up at school early in the morning and took the bus together.

First, we explored the museum and saw many interesting exhibitions. Then, the guide taught us how robots work. The most exciting part was when I tried on an astronaut's helmet and took photos.

We had a wonderful time. I wrote down everything in my diary when I got home. Now I realize how important science is in our daily life.

一般过去时写作技巧

  1. 结构：主语 + 动词过去式
  2. 时间标志：yesterday, last week, ago等
  3. 顺序词：使用first, then, finally等使文章有条理
  4. 细节描写：加入具体做了什么、看到了什么等细节